Age: 67.58d Health: 42.43% Posters: 13 Posts: 16 Replies: 14 Files: 1+2
|>>||Anonymous 13sep2017(we)07:52 No.53247 OP |P1
|Friend made this,tell me if you think it's shit.|
It looks a bit chunky because i converted from MP4
622x926, Uncompressed. 911 frames, 60 fps (00:15).
Ver6, AS1/AS2. Network access: No. Text: No.
Bitmaps: No. Audio: Yes. Video: Yes.[find in archive]
|>>||Anonymous 13sep2017(we)08:47 No.53248 A |P2R1
lines around the head area morph too erratically
|>>||Anonymous 13sep2017(we)09:20 No.53249 B |P3R2
|There has to be better sound available. Otherwise, just make a cum scene and you'll be great.|
Just...god that noise.
|>>||Anonymous 13sep2017(we)09:53 No.53250 C |P4R3
|I think the sound is okay for a goo girl. Lines could be steadier on the head but I like it.|
|>>||Anonymous 13sep2017(we)15:33 No.53255 D |P5R4
|take one full cycle and make it loop, will cut down on the filesize like 95%|
|>>||Anonymous 13sep2017(we)15:57 No.53256 E |P6R5
|well for starters it's a movie. could have been cut down to just 1 repeat on loop, saving 90% of the file size by the looks of it. it even has a god damn fadeout.|
the art is alright but as a flash maker it annoys me. if it was proper flash with vectors i would have praised it. i estimate the file size would have been at around 100 KiB, including audio, and the visuals would have been flawless even on a 4K monitor.
|>>||Anonymous 13sep2017(we)19:20 No.53265 F |P7R6
|It's pretty good if you move away ~20ft and squint|
|>>||Anonymous 13sep2017(we)23:04 No.53271 OP |P8R7
Well again,i had to convert,next time they're probably gonna naturally export in flash,fixing yer complaints.
|>>||Anonymous 14sep2017(th)00:37 No.53273 E |P9R8
thank you and please do come again if that's true
|>>||Anonymous 14sep2017(th)08:02 No.53285 G |P10R9
|Animation is pretty solid, but why not just have it loop the one section instead of having a blank screen at the last 1 or 2 frames?|
|>>||Anonymous 14sep2017(th)14:27 No.53289 H |P11R10
|>converted from MP4|
|>>||Anonymous 15sep2017(fr)14:57 No.53318 I |P12R11
|The head's outline is rather inconsistent. And the sound is... strange, but appropriate for a goo girl I guess.|
|>>||Anonymous 15sep2017(fr)14:57 No.53319 I |P13
|You got a link to that friend of yours so I can compare this to other stuff he does?|
|>>||Jesus 17sep2017(su)11:29 No.53380 J |P14R12
|this is decent|
if this is your friend's first anim
then he has a future in drawing porn
|>>||Anonymous 6nov2017(mo)14:07 No.54833 K |P15R13
|>>||mr. meeseeks 8nov2017(we)04:05 No.54871 L |P16R14
|Pretty good. Just needs a cum scene and a soundless version and your friend could be the next big hentai artist.|