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|>>||EroPharaoh!b8rgIEveP6 5sep2017(tu)02:59 No.53033 OP |P1
|EroPharaoh - The Tales of St. Clare's (18+ Commission)|
|>>||Anonymous 5sep2017(tu)06:12 No.53034 A |P2R1
|>>||Anonymous 7sep2017(th)07:47 No.53086 B |P3R2
|>>||Anonymous 7sep2017(th)08:45 No.53088 C |P4R3
|>X-Ray is still on by default.|
C'mon now. I remember talking to ya about this.
|>>||Anonymous 7sep2017(th)08:45 No.53089 D |P5R4
|I'm almost sure the music is religious.|
|>>||Anonymous 7sep2017(th)11:04 No.53094 E |P6R5
|>>||Anonymous 7sep2017(th)12:04 No.53095 F |P7R6
>half overlay on top of penis
lazy but i lol'd a little, at least you tried
good work otherwise, never even heard of Tales of St. Clare's before
|>>||EroPharaoh!b8rgIEveP6 7sep2017(th)14:17 No.53103 OP |P8R7
Haha, I remember. I figured it'd be okay since it's not directly over them (like the last one with x-ray), so it doesn't look like they're cut open.
It's a remix of Bach!
He actually wanted it to be a strap-on with a realistic penis, the only way I could think of doing that without it being confusing is putting a little bit of the pink part in there - the futa option I threw in because it was easy enough. ;)
|>>||Anonymous 8sep2017(fr)06:28 No.53123 G |P9R8
|The other one should sprout a cock with the futa option is turned on.|
|>>||Anonymous 8sep2017(fr)07:26 No.53126 B |P10R9
I mean yeah animation and looks are solid, but the content is pretty lackluster although my biggest complain would be that you removed the necktie when you half undress them, I miss it a bit. First world problem tho
|>>||EroPharaoh!b8rgIEveP6 8sep2017(fr)08:25 No.53127 OP |P11R10
I was kind of mad I missed that, I meant to have the tie hang across their shoulders and didn't realize I forgot that until release. I was pretty late with this one. The guy who commissioned it didn't mention it, so I'm guessing he didn't want the ties in that part anyway. I'm sincerely sorry about the ties. I feel shame.
Anyway, thanks, I'll keep working to improve! :D
|>>||Anonymous 9sep2017(sa)05:18 No.53146 H |P12R11
|Its good, but not as good as your previous work|
I think its the lack of variety in facial expressions
|>>||Anonymous 9sep2017(sa)06:38 No.53149 B |P13R12
Weird that you say that, I personally thought that was a highly specific problem I saw, never would have thought you actually wanted to do that.
Anyways, not Summers Birthday tier quality but enjoyable. I also miss more positions in your work, mostly it's 1 or 2 and the switching of characters.
Also more titjobs or blowjobs would be appreciated, but then again, I don't pay you so I don't have a say.
|>>||EroPharaoh!b8rgIEveP6 9sep2017(sa)14:41 No.53154 OP |P14R13
The commission I'm working on now with Lois Griffin will have a POV cowgirl scene and a titfuck scene :D
|>>||EroPharaoh!b8rgIEveP6 9sep2017(sa)18:38 No.53157 OP |P15
|>>||Anonymous 10sep2017(su)02:25 No.53161 I |P16R14
|>>||Anonymous 10sep2017(su)10:55 No.53167 J |P17R15
I'm surprised you have the gall to post on a website with such a cancerous userbase. I respect that.
|>>||Anonymous 10sep2017(su)10:56 No.53168 J |P18
I'm surprised you have the gall to post your stuff on a website with such a cancerous user base. I respect that.
|>>||Anonymous 10sep2017(su)11:11 No.53169 K |P19R16
|Fairly good. There's a lot of negative space, maybe you could add a zoom option.|
|>>||Anonymous 10sep2017(su)20:57 No.53173 L |P20R17
|Wow, I can really only join what's been said before.|
Animation and sound design is seriously solid. Just the lack of that certain pezaz (probably due to lack of creative freedom that comes from commission) makes it short of a AAA flash.
I love seeing a flash like that which isn't Family Guy, Rick&Morty or those mainstream unerotic cartoon shows. Makes it pretty good in my book.
PS: Noticed a little bug during cumming scene with a certain configuration. See Image. Didn't check if it was fixed in the newgrounds version.
|>>||Anonymous 10sep2017(su)23:22 No.53179 F |P21R18
a good chunk of his fans probably come from here just so you know. im one of em.
|>>||EroPharaoh!b8rgIEveP6 11sep2017(mo)05:51 No.53188 OP |P22R19
I think most of the userbase is good people, mostly lurkers. The loudest are usually not the ones to listen to. ;) Thanks for the respect!
Zoom option is a good idea, though I probably won't be updating this (if I do, it won't be any time soon unfortunately - I have quite a bit of work backed up!)
>Just the lack of that certain pezaz (probably due to lack of creative freedom that comes from commission) makes it short of a AAA flash.
You're right about the lack of options being due to it being a commission - there's always so much more I want to put into my projects.
>I love seeing a flash like that which isn't Family Guy, Rick&Morty or those mainstream unerotic cartoon shows.
lol my next one is Family Guy and my main personal project right now is Rick & Morty...but after that, I've got some less mainstream commissions.
I did fix that bug on the Newgrounds version, but thanks for letting me know :D
Ey-ooooo! Thanks :)
|>>||Anonymous 11sep2017(mo)11:46 No.53194 M |P23
>complain about new userbase being cancerous
What's that? Tastes kind of irony.